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by Eldon Sarte
Keep it simple! I'm sure you've heard this advice
before. But did you know that this applies to your site's written
content as well? Many don't consider written content a design issue.
(Client: "Yup, just design a good-looking webpage. and we'll plunk
in the text!" I don't think so.) It's a MAJOR part of design, complementing
and affecting the visuals, and vice-versa.
The written message needs to be DESIGNED to fit the
medium. And the Web is no exception. In fact, the Web is a lot less
flexible than, say, a magazine or newspaper. The typical Web user
(your prospect) is what I call a "quick-hitter." He needs his info
FAST. If he doesn't get it quickly, or it's TOO MUCH TROUBLE to find,
he's gone, off to the next resource.
This meant a major rewrite of my site's content. I'm
in the "can't shut him up" camp of writers. Often good for books and
magazine articles, but the Web? Nope. I lose them. My visitor logs
tell me so. So snip...
...and boy, was it tough! Not because I couldn't stomach
mangling my creations (sheeesh!), there was just so much info to pack
in! But I managed. You will too.
To avoid the hassle I just went through, keep it short
from the beginning. I honestly do not know how much text is enough
and what is too much. I'm guessing that five screens should be max.
NOT five screens full of text -- my designs have a LOT of whitespace
-- a user shouldn't need to page down more than five screens to see
everything on the page. This measure isn't strict (I've exceeded it),
nor is it scientific. It's just an educated GUESS. My future logs
will tell me whether I'm guessing right.
For topics with a LOT of information that simply won't
fit into five screens, break it up into multiple pages, preferably
logical groups, giving users the option of reading just the sections
that interest them.
But what if you want them to read the WHOLE thing
across multiple pages? Use an old magazine/newspaper trick: break
paragraphs in half. End one page with the top half, and start the
next with the bottom. Of course, the text needs to communicate that
it's only half-finished, that there's more if the user continues on.
If you do use this trick, don't break mid-sentence
like they do in print. Annoying. You don't want your users annoyed;
too easy to just click you off. Finish the thought, then continue
on.
An added benefit from concentrating on keeping it
short from the beginning is your writing and thinking will most likely
improve! A self-imposed limit forces you to structure and organize
your thoughts better than if you wrote under the assumption that you
had an unlimited amount of space, an easy and dangerous mistake common
on the Web.
For now, remember: Keep it simple AND keep it short!