
The Secrets to Effective Sales Writing
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by Patrick
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A sale transaction occurs when a buyer
is convinced that an exchange of money for good or service is favorable
to him. This act of convincing is what we commonly call "selling".
In many instances, particularly in cyber-selling, a sale may be
concluded solely by written persuasion via the emails or web pages.
Contrary to popular belief, successes
in sales do not always go to those who rely on a "gift of gab" for
success. Instead, they go to those who have thorough knowledge and
understanding of what they have to offer to their target consumers.
Similarly, the secrets to successful
sales writing lie in thorough thinking and preliminary planning.
If the right questions have been asked and answered beforehand,
the writing will be easier and the message will be many times more
persuasive.
+ Do you know your product well?
+ What are its best features?
+ How is it different from competitive products?
+ What are its strengths and weaknesses with references to competitive
products?
+ Who are our prospective customers?
+ What are their needs and how best can we serve them?
+ What specific action is wanted?
From the above questions, you should
notice that it is not enough just to have good product knowledge.
You must have in- depth knowledge of the competitions and consumers
as well. You may have to undertake some research by going through
past industry and newspaper's reports.
The emphasis here is to cultivate a "YOU"
attitude - everything you say or write must be presented from the
consumer's perspective in the right competitive environment.
With all the relevant facts and figures
on hand, you are now ready to start writing the sales letter. A
common approach is to use the AIDA (Attention, Interest, Desire
and Action) procedure, which summarizes the selling process in four
steps:
1. Getting the prospect's attention.
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The first sentence is the most important message in an unsolicited
sales letter. It must grab the reader's attention and arouse desire
to read the sentences that follows.
There are many successful techniques.
You can highlight a solution to a problem; announce a bargain; offer
a gift; raise a question; or identify a product's key feature. The
choices are limited only by your own imagination.
Nevertheless, a good attention-getting
technique must have the following characteristics:
+ It is related to the products and its key benefits.
+ It focuses on a key selling point.
+ It addresses the reader's needs.
+ It is original, interesting and straight to the point.
Remember that people are unique and they
respond to stimulus differently. You should try each and every technique
you can think of and in the process, monitor the responses to your
sales letters to identify the best way to appeal to your prospects.
For example:
source: IMC Web site http://www.aloha-city.com/imc/
Why reinvent the wheel ... when you can
learn from the experts!
A group of highly successful Internet
marketers have created a private Web site to share their experience
and expertise. Why waste your time, energy and resources doing everything
on your own? Learn from the experts and direct your time to building
your business and making more money in a shorter period of time.
2. Arousing interest in the product.
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You are off to a good start if your first paragraph helps the reader
identify something that he may need to solve his problems. Taking
the cue from the above example, you should then proceed to stress
the key benefits of joining the private Web site as a member.
Note: You must always remember to use
an active voice. Put the reader in a scenario where he can see how
the product or service will benefit him.
For example:
Can you picture the speed at which your
business will grow and thrive when you're able to...
+ Get your questions answered free of charge by Internet consultants
as often as you want.
+ Get your Web site or marketing campaign evaluated free of charge
by these experts. + Get the latest insider's tips on starting, promoting
and marketing your business, product, or service online.
+ The information on the site is constantly updated! As an IMC member,
you'll learn everything we know as soon as we discover it!
Sound good so far? Then stop what you're
doing and listen carefully: Because the Internet is evolving so
fast - and the rules of the game are changing at lightning speed
- few businesses can keep up. That is our challenge. We will keep
you on top of the "rules of the game" so that you can meet the challenge
and win... over and over again!
The above example only presents a one-sided
argument on the merits of taking up the IMC membership. How is it
different from competitive products? What are its strengths and
weaknesses compared to competitive products?
These questions are most likely to be
raised in the reader's mind, and if left unanswered, would pose
a hindrance to closing a sale. Continuing with our above example,
IMC must explain why referring to marketing books and other online
marketing courses won't deliver the desired results.
3. Creating desire by presenting convincing
evidence.
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In step 2, you have successfully introduced your product or service
and made various claims on its purported benefits. Assuming that
you have aroused the reader's interest, you must now present enough
supporting evidence to turn the interest into desire.
Few people will believe us if we exaggerate
claims or make general statements without supporting them with facts
and figures. The key is to be objective at all times. Whenever possible,
you can also rely on the following tools to support your statements:
+ Use testimonials.
A good testimonial from a satisfied customer is worth a thousand
words. This is especially so if the customer has a credible track
record in the industry. If your customers do not send testimonials
to you voluntarily, you can request for their comments through questionnaires
or follow-up correspondences.
+ Offer a guarantee.
Nothing beats a "full refund if you are not satisfied" guarantee,
especially in overcoming the inherent inhibitions that consumers
have in making purchases online.
+ Present your credentials.
This is absolutely necessary if you are offering a professional
service. Most people will believe anything a winner says and will
take the extra steps to emulate his success. If you are an expert
in a particular field, don't hesitate to present your track records
prominently in your sales letter. It can work wonders!
4. Calling for action.
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You can increase your chance of getting an action by: + asking for
a specific action confidently; + offering a reward or bonus for
taking action; and + creating an urgency to act immediately with
a special time- sensitive offer.
Let's go back to our IMC example to see
how this is done:
By registering today, Thursday, June
01, 2000, I will personally see to it that you get 50% off the standard
registration fee of $500.00 per year!
Plus, you will get all three bonuses
- Ezine advertising database and three months of free web hosting.
And don't forget - your IMC membership is also tax-deductible!
So, if you want the $250.00 price reduction,
register today. This is a limited time offer. We have raised the
membership fee numerous times over this past year. It's very simple...
you must take action today if you want results tomorrow!
The above writing tips should help you
get started on writing an effective sales letter yourself. Remember
that practice makes perfect and the best way to learn how to write
sales letter effectively is to try out as many versions as you can.
Monitor the responses from each version closely and in the process,
identify the best way to appeal to your prospects.