Copywriting: Techniques for a Great Body!
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by Bill Montgomery
1)
Think about your Readers
When writing
ad copy be sure that the average reader can easily understand and relate to it.
Put yourself in their place. Would you understand? Would you say, "That's me"?
One way to help you write for your readers, is to write just as if you were saying
it to their face. Address the reader as "you" in your copy. Just like a one on
one conversation. Sometime take a closer look at some of the advertising around
you. How many times do you see them using "you"?
Make
your copy interesting to read, almost story-like, all the time generating enthusiasm
for your product or service. Find ways to place facts in your copy without sounding
like an Army Service Manual. The trick is to convey the hard dry facts and numbers,
while making them interesting to read.
Don't
talk about yourself. Readers don't care what you like, what you did or what you
think. They want to know if they will like it and how it will benefit them.
2)
Organize your Copy
When you write
your copy you should always know what your primary message or selling point is
as well as all the secondary selling points. You might want to use your primary
message as part of your headline and then dedicate a few lines or paragraph to
expand on it. Then fit in your secondary selling points in lines or paragraphs
after that. Whether they are a few lines or a paragraph would depend on the size
of your copy. How much space you can set aside for your selling points? Before
you start writing your copy write down all your selling points. Sort them in the
order of importance. When writing your copy, move smoothly from point to point,
one leading into the next.
3) Short
is Better
Everyone knows that short
sentences are easier to read and comprehend than long sentences. One thing that
all writers have in common is that they are taught to write short and to-the-point
sentences. Read back through your copy. If you find a sentence that has more then
12 words, find a way to break it down. Break all long sentences into 2 sentences.
If necessary, break them down again. You can also use hyphens to help separate
long sentences. This is not to say that all your sentences should be the same
length. Copy can become boring when the sentences are all the same length. Vary
their length. Just keep them under 12 words. Remember you are writing copy, not
fiction. Sentence fragments, as long as they sound good to the readers ear, are
completely acceptable in copywriting.
4)
Don't be a Dictionary
Use simple and
easy words. That's what a reader understands. Consider the mindset that you are
communicating with. This reader is not trying to dissect and devour your copy.
This is someone, who for one reason or another has been distracted from their
primary goal to read what you have to say. It's only a short pause they're taking
to quickly read your words. If you use complex words, you will either annoy or
completely lose your reader. Keep It Simple Stupid! Ad Copy is Communication.
Don't think that you are impressing them with words they probably couldn't spell
and would never use themselves. Make it easy for the reader to understand and
keep up with the copy.
5) Keep Clear
of Tech-Terms with Wide Audiences
If
your copy is to be read by a wide audience, don't wrongfully assume that they
will know what you know. If you feel that these facts must be used, find a way
to convey these terms in the best way that they can be understood. Don't use a
technical term unless it is the best choice. Sometimes you have no other route
than to use technical terms. Lets use "software" as an example. What other way
can you put it? It's software. But then again you wouldn't want to say "C++ Software"
just Software. The average reader has no idea that C++ is a programming language
and could care even less.
6) Clear
& Concise
Keep your ad copy free of
clutter. Don't use words that aren't needed. You are wasting your readers' time,
weakening your sales message and taking up valuable space that could be better
served in your interest. Your readers' attention span is short and they are usually
in a hurry. Avoid redundancies, over-worded phrases and other poor writing mistakes
that serve no other function than taking up space. Provide specific and concrete
information in a clear and straightforward manner. The more specific you are the
less chance your readers have of misunderstanding you.
7)
For God's Sake, Get to the Point
Be
direct and to the point. There is not time for beating around the bush or to keep
your reader guessing.
Next to the
headline, the first paragraph of your ad copy is the most important text in your
work. The first paragraph, better known as the "Lead" paragraph, is what draws
in the reader. If your lead paragraph is uninteresting to the reader, they will
surely move on. Move right into your primary selling point. Don't waste time with
introductions and explanations. If you must use them, use them later. Your ad
copy should be the essence of sell from the first word to the last. Loose the
fluff and fringes. They're for weddings not ad copy.
8)
There's No Place for Sexism or Racism
I
was listening to an ad on a college radio station in the middle of the summer
semester. It was an ad for a local business. During the course of this 30-second
ad they managed to insult the Korean, Chinese, Japanese, Thai and all women everywhere.
Now needless to say that any type of racist or sexist attitude doesn't go far
in advertising. But here we have a student population, which during the summer,
by the statistics taken each year, is almost 30% of oriental origin and 65% female.
Not only was this commercial poor advertising, but just plain stupid.
Gender
bashing, racist remarks and general rudeness offends people. You don't sell by
offending others. The hardest of them to deal with is the use of gender in your
copy. How do you handle it? Instead of "service man", it's "service person". Instead
of "his", it's "his/hers". There are however a couple of other ways to help deal
with this problem. One is two use plurals. Instead of his or her, try they, them
or theirs. Another is to rewrite your copy taking out any reference to sex at
all. You may even try alternating sexes through the ad copy.
Well,
that's it for now, hope you're walking away with more than you came with.
Listed
above are just a few techniques that you can use to help you write better ad copy.
Remember good copy sells, but great
copy sells well!